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Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
Statistics!
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
So did I!
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Say My Name
Aww, this is really cute. I can't actually remember the last time I read a poem that was written from the point of view of an animal. It's pretty amusing ...
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Re: Smoking Kills
Oh wow, this is awesome. I love how you've done the smoke and how delicate and wispy it looks. I don't really have any criticisms, I just wish I could ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Some artwork
These are really good! I love your use of colour in the first one, but the person doesn't seem to have any knees! Poor thing looks a bit like my ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Love: A Cycle
I like this. I like how you compared the cycle of falling in and out of love to being reborn. It's a very simple poem, and you didn't need to ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Three women and a blank page
I really like this! Especially the second stanza, and what the sister says and how she looks while she's doing it. One thing I would say is that when you ...
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Re: A Vision of the Sea
Hey! You use description really well in this piece, I can imagine really clearly what you're talking about. I'm not sure why her freedom would mean your destruction, so I ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: When I Play The Piano
I really like this. I like how you started in the present and then went back in time. Your rhyming is a bit simple in places but it doesn't sound ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Waiting
Wow. I love your writing style. You say things in such a unique way that I wouldn't expect. I really don't have anything to critique, your description is so beautiful ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
If you do another 50, you'll get the star :p Not sure I'll manage that but I'm tempted to try!
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: How do you plot your stories?
I don't plot. I might have a vague idea of what I want to happen in my head and as I write I think of things I want to happen ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
I aimed for 500 reviews (I was at 476) and I reached it, but I thought I was going to be getting another blue star! Now I'm disappointed. :( But ...
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Re: Stuff
Haha, I like this. It really does lighten the mood and it's very cute and catchy. It does sound a little bit repetitive but that's just the style of the ...
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Re: Dust and Shadows
Hi! This is good. I like how you compare the girl to plastic flowers, and the concept of not being really alive or dead. You use description really well in ...
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